I just read the new chapter, and as no one is around for me to vent, I shall do so here.
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I should start from a few chapters before this one.
*ahem* WHAT THE HELL? THEY WERE FIGHTING SO MUCH, AND THEN ALL THIS TIME IT WAS JUST SHARINGAN? JUST AN ILLSUION? HOW DO THEY FIGHT IF ALL THEY ARE DOING IS FIGHTING IN THE BRAIN?
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And then later, by all rights Itachi would have won. (Heh. See Sasuke, leaving the village did not help you beat up your brother.)
... though, the ending was so unexpected. I was yelling thinking that Sasuke would end up losing his eyes and why was he just standing there, when Itachi does The Poke.
(I might have celebrated a little at that moment, for THEY WERE BROTHERS AGAIN! and I just loved that part of their relationship (it didn't help I reread/watched the part about their past again). and I couldn't fully believe that Itachi killed their KAWAII!brotherly-thing for power and eyes.)
...And now I find out ITACHI DIED? WHY THE HELL DID THAT HAPPEN? I mean, I thought the two brothers had just fainted, but Itachi died. and sasuke is dying. (There goes the whole fantasy I had that Itachi would return, but whatever).
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And Tobi--who, even if he is an immortal killer--glared. (and is no longer acting all that childish).
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This reminds me of Deidara. (Why did he have to die as well?).
Anyways, I wrote this for Epiff Annie's birthday and ended up rushing the ending...*sigh* (but she read it anyways, so I feel wonderfully happy).
...anyways, like I said the ending was rushed for it. (but I think I am improving).